Hi Cameron Hart,
Thank you for your inquiry.
Yes, the below message would suffice. You only need to include it in a conspicuous place, viewable by the end-users, like an "About" box, for instance.
I guess you have already taken the rest of the redistribution requirements into account, but I would like to mention them here just in case In order to legally redistribute our software, you also need to ensure that:
1. Your application is adding significant primary functionality to our controls.
2. You distribute the SOFTWARE, in object code form only.
ensure that the SOFTWARE is not distributed in any form that allows it
to be reused by any application other than your solution.
4. You duly inform your
customers that they are not allowed to use the SOFTWARE independently
from your solution. For use of the SOFTWARE in design–time (i.e. within
a development environment such as Microsoft Visual Studio) your
customers need to purchase the appropriate number of Developer Licenses
Let me know if you have any additional questions.
the Telerik team