The Response.Redirect call changes the HTTP header so the script is not registered at all, you can easily confirm this by adding a blocking browser alert that you will never see:
/* + Model.Id*/
I am attaching a sample page with some more ideas and explanations in the comments so you can use it as base for implementing this in your project.
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